Ah. Yes. I see why you are the winner. I read this and saw a movie. The dialog was pitch perfect and this oozed with tone and tension. Brilliant work. Congrats!
thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write. I have various “tube” stories already finished, starting with Adam-tube and Eve-tube and moving all the way to a media-studies lecture on the history of information, according to tubes. I’ll be sharing more soon!
Earl was so well done. All of them were great portraits but there was a lot of character in Earl’s Waffle House line and I think he’ll stick with me the most
Wonderful style and structure
Very slick, congratulations!
This. Is. Excellent. Dialog sharp enough to cut, introspection gorgeously written. Nice work, well deserved.
Wow! I felt broken down to all my constituent tubes extruding my way thru life. Congratulations on a championship performance!
Ah. Yes. I see why you are the winner. I read this and saw a movie. The dialog was pitch perfect and this oozed with tone and tension. Brilliant work. Congrats!
Excellent! Lines are sharp!
Knee it was good from that very first description of the light reassembling. Great stuff.
Thank you! Yeah I went into my own head for that one; halogen gives me migraines
Confident, cool, kept the reader off-kilter. Loved it. Congratulations!
thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write. I have various “tube” stories already finished, starting with Adam-tube and Eve-tube and moving all the way to a media-studies lecture on the history of information, according to tubes. I’ll be sharing more soon!
The image of the tubes gripped me from the start, then I relished in all the other ones. Incredible atmosphere
Earl was so well done. All of them were great portraits but there was a lot of character in Earl’s Waffle House line and I think he’ll stick with me the most