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Prose was top shelf. I was left with a vivid sense of mystery, tension, and melancholy.

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Thank you! It was refined to a nice top shelf point with the help of Sandolore and Brock! (Apparently I can’t tag them in the comments on the app)

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My goosepimples puckered. Urban catacombs are where it's at. Great work Keith.

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Thaaaaaank

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The language was sublime. I felt suffocated and angst-ridden all the way through. I hate car parks (British terminology) anyway. Even more so now!

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Happy to help deepen the fear haha thanks!

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Literal and figurative descent, friends in low places indeed. Well done.

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Thank you, thank you, thank you very much *lip curl and brow raise*

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