this is so amazing. what a combination to bring together in such a dope way and you all were so so so good. Im gonna read a bunch more and comment more but yes seven times to this type of work.
Oscar this was so good man. you gotta read my Monster Truck. It almost reads perfect after this piece as well as your earlier piece obviously. I loved both stories and really enjoy your prose style and your voice. it really gets deep inside me.
this was your best fiction to date to me. I loved the pov work. I loved the pacing. your flash fiction is getting sick cause this is less than 300 words. you nailed both features in the magazine, and i love you in the middle of this fiction collaboration.
i listened to this twice. Once with the ai voice and the other time with your imbed voice. Its amazing how much different the experiences of the story are with and without the more layered voice work. I thinks you are such a multi-disciplinary talented artist. You are definitely one I am going to keep my eye on and continue to appreciate.
Reading/hearing the words "under the overneath" gave me the kind of satisfaction I get with the first spoon crack through the scorched surface of a Crème Brûlée...
Cozy company! Thanks Aaron, Oscar and Magnetic for a cool art experience!
and Aaron T!
this is so amazing. what a combination to bring together in such a dope way and you all were so so so good. Im gonna read a bunch more and comment more but yes seven times to this type of work.
Oscar Ruto Chemelil: “Monsters”
Oscar this was so good man. you gotta read my Monster Truck. It almost reads perfect after this piece as well as your earlier piece obviously. I loved both stories and really enjoy your prose style and your voice. it really gets deep inside me.
Magnetic: “Lake Ozark”
this was your best fiction to date to me. I loved the pov work. I loved the pacing. your flash fiction is getting sick cause this is less than 300 words. you nailed both features in the magazine, and i love you in the middle of this fiction collaboration.
Jon T. “You Once”
i listened to this twice. Once with the ai voice and the other time with your imbed voice. Its amazing how much different the experiences of the story are with and without the more layered voice work. I thinks you are such a multi-disciplinary talented artist. You are definitely one I am going to keep my eye on and continue to appreciate.
Thanks Andrew
Phenomenal, and such a cool idea to use the artwork for inspiration — it’s haunting.
Reading/hearing the words "under the overneath" gave me the kind of satisfaction I get with the first spoon crack through the scorched surface of a Crème Brûlée...
That really caramelizes my sugar. Thank you!
Great comment. And yeah, “under the overneath”. Jon T has done it again.
These are all so good! And very cool execution. Finding myself lost in Sum Flux or other on the regular these days🖤