I'm about to read all these on the road starting with yours and you better not have embarrassed me and your shit better be great! lol jk...(not really)
Ok ok ok you brought that top shelf shit for this story. Your prose style is so descriptive without being florid, I love how that works here. I'm definitely ended this story eager to learn more about this apocalyptic world you've built. Soldier salute.
"She walked as if caught in his shadow, moving like the second hand of a clock after the first". Your story is amazing but this is my favorite line! I can picture every single detail. Great job!🔥
I'm about to read all these on the road starting with yours and you better not have embarrassed me and your shit better be great! lol jk...(not really)
Andrew just put on his white judging wig and black robes. Better be shaking in your boots, Brock.
Well, I hope my story passes the test; I'd hate to be judged by someone with such impeccable taste in wigs and robes! Bring the knickers too!
Ok ok ok you brought that top shelf shit for this story. Your prose style is so descriptive without being florid, I love how that works here. I'm definitely ended this story eager to learn more about this apocalyptic world you've built. Soldier salute.
"Top shelf shit."
That'll do, that'll do . . . 🙏 Thank you, my friend! I can't wait for people to see where it's going on Parts II-III.
Dazzling. Can’t wait.
Thank you, Scott! Part II will answer many of your questions and beg one more crucial one, which is the substance of Part III.
It's very dense. So it works best in these small little units.
Hopefully people play with this story in their heads and the "small" becomes "VERY BIG" with this story.
Bloody brilliant. This darkness is where I love my fiction to lurk - both reading and writing. Looking forward to the next instalments!
Mysterious! I can't wait to see where this goes!
"She walked as if caught in his shadow, moving like the second hand of a clock after the first". Your story is amazing but this is my favorite line! I can picture every single detail. Great job!🔥
Thank you Alex. Yes!! Somebody noticed. I saved a few favourite metaphors/similes for this one. Hope you read on :)
So so good! I love the way you write, the images you create. Awesome work!!!
Thanks so, so much for coming back to it!! I hope you enjoy the new story in the next edition as well, Wildflower :)
I‘m rummaging through the posts. 😉
I see you!
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