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Andrew Robert Colom's avatar

Wow! Didn't see that coming. Prose is super detailed and evocative. Love the character work between the leads. The setting is super alive. I can't wait to see what interrupts their dinner.

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Brock Eldon's avatar

Thank you!!! Thank you for all that. Yes, what's coming to interrupt their dinner . . . ? You may be surprised.

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Andrew Robert Colom's avatar

This version has the ai audio on it! Brock you gotta turn the AI voice on in your other publication so folks can listen while reading!

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Brock Eldon's avatar

Good shout ;)

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Zivah's avatar

Passhhhttt! I wasn’t expecting that! More dense, glorious detail and so alive. Brilliant.

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Scott MacLeod's avatar

Just wow. Holding my breath for part three, or third course I guess.

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