Yeah it better not be over..... You had me at Mermaid! This a brilliant example of writing just enough to hold the reader, make us believe, give us space for our thoughts in a way that mirrors your narrator and leaves us standing waiting in the torrent for the next part... damm, that was good!
As Emil said - phenomenal writing. The unfolding layers (like parchment!), the gradual reveal of the story of both Roe and Evelyn… and anything that involves water has me hooked, quite frankly. I’m on tenterhooks, waiting for the next part.
This gets better and better as you go. Well done my friend.
Thank you for all your help!
I love it. Nice work.
This is fucking phenomenal work.
This is so good!! I would buy the book!!
Yeah it better not be over..... You had me at Mermaid! This a brilliant example of writing just enough to hold the reader, make us believe, give us space for our thoughts in a way that mirrors your narrator and leaves us standing waiting in the torrent for the next part... damm, that was good!
As Emil said - phenomenal writing. The unfolding layers (like parchment!), the gradual reveal of the story of both Roe and Evelyn… and anything that involves water has me hooked, quite frankly. I’m on tenterhooks, waiting for the next part.
Shark tooth
Excellent point.
Intensity. Anticipation. Really love this.
I’m hooked
Finished!