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You wrote a poem!!!!!!!! Wow, I'm about to really get into this! Sandolore killed your graphic too!

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Stepping more into my poetry bag appreciate it family

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You got Coltrane behind the voiceover of the poem!!!! Oh so you just decided to go crazy for Sandolore!

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That’s my guy Miles 🙌🏾🙌🏾

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Yeah as I was typing I think I got this wrong this is miles Davis.

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The audio adds so much suspense! Love this

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I totally agree!

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I thought so ;)

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Magnetic –

This is amazing. The recording is phenomenal. Now I get why @Andrew Robert Colom’s been hyping you up!

Hold on . . . my computer, my hands . . . Damn. My laptop is getting chilly. Coolest verse on Substack.

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Thank you, much love. Your story was cold as ice looking forward to parts 2 and 3. Imagery had me feeling like I was right there.

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I’m gonna break rule one of parking lot club and talk about how cool this is

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Brilliant poem. I love the repetition ‘never speak of it’ reinforcing the message to keep shtum.

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